Posted in book release, First Novel

My Book Release

In 2016 I put pen to paper to write a book about two brothers who drove from London to India with strangers.  This road trip took place in the 1960s and was a remarkable feat because until then the brothers had never driven out of London before.  But the story interweaves with their journey to England in the first instance, and how it shaped them for the road trip. 

I am over the moon to have finally finished writing their story and published it online to share with everyone.  The personal journey has been a mix of challenges and jubilation.  Trying to balance work and family life, and pouring your heart and soul into writing has taught me many lessons. 

Often we get so involved in the situation that when we can’t dedicate the time, it can become frustrating.  Later I’ll share some personal tips on how to ‘achieve that writing goal’, it definitely worked for me.

I found writing one of the most liberating experiences and to anyone who wants to write a story of any genre, you can do it.

The book is out now in digital and paperback on amazon

Posted in Friday, Writing

#Friday 15.0: Editor recommendation needed

Each week I will (try and) share a small segment of something useful I learnt. While this is for my own amusement I hope it resonates with my lovely readers.

I’ve been following the standard model

                  Today’s what have I learnt post is more a reach out to the blogging community on Editor recommendations. For those who have been following me, you will know that in 2015 I started working on my novel. As of May 2020, and after copious amounts of wonderful, helpful feedback I have taken the book as far as I can. If I follow a standard model for manuscript development, then it looks something like this: 

Continue reading “#Friday 15.0: Editor recommendation needed”

Posted in Month End

Month End – May accomplishments

Every accomplishment starts with a decision to try

– unknown

In amongst the daily grind we must not forget about our own personal accomplishments. So as I speedily arrive to the end of this month, what have I been up to?

Debut Novel – My Final Edits Done!

On Friday 15th May I finally completed the last edit on my book which got underway in July 2015. In essence, a story about two brothers who drove a family from London to India. A family they had never met before! I feel I have taken the book as far as I can, so now time to give it to the professionals to rip apart, join back up and see where it takes me. I’d like to thank everyone who been involved in reading, re-reading, advising, the journey became a little easier.
During the writing of this book we sadly lost one of the brothers a few years back, and while my writing dipped my motivation spurred on! A lot of this I owe to them both. Continue reading “Month End – May accomplishments”

Posted in Writing

How to combat fear of novel editing

(Photo by Kiwihug on Unsplash)

Disclaimer: I am not a published author (yet), nor do I profess to mastering the arts. 

I’d like to share some images with you to kick off this post.  I took these while riding along some country lanes last week.

“In my world, this is how editing my first novel feels like”

I completed the first draft of my book in 2017, two years after starting it. Then it was time to share it out with my group of readers.  There was a group that included friends and family (alpha readers) and the feedback was positive, but there was much work to do. Then I widened the net, some new readers I knew of, some I had said “Hi” to once or twice at the gym, or a contact through a friend (Beta readers).  The feedback was great and a real boost, but I can safely say the editing process sometimes felt like an SAS training camp.

Like the images show, just as you are getting near it all seems far again! 

Tips on dealing with editing

So the situation is, your lovely group of readers have fed back their comments.  In my case, that was comments x 5.  It felt like the letter I knew was sitting on the console table but one I didn’t want open.  I’d walk past it, but I knew at some point it had to be dealt with.  So lets try and open that letter
(P.S. written in the notion that we are NOT in lockdown, and life is back to normal – hectic)

(1) Don’t see it as a chore – I’d say reverse this back to the moment you put pen to paper and decided to write a book.  If you see it as a chore, stop right there.

(2) Don’t take the feedback personally – You’ve asked for feedback based on a subjective piece of writing. Remember your reader has shared thoughts on what they have read, not what they know of you personally. 

(3) Set a timer to review edits – If you are working during the week, then try and set a timer each day.  I set a 30 minute countdown each day for my edits in a working week, and stopped right there.

(4) Book in weekends and stick to it – One of the main reasons, as I see it, why our draft copies can sit in a drawer for long periods is because of the reality of priorities. Simply put, we feel guilty spending time on ourselves. The weekends give you a good opportunity to work through those edits. 
Book the time in with family for your edits and stick to it.  For me, it means that one weekend my wife will cover the kids sports drop offs and picks up, while I delve deep into editing. This also includes setting times during the day for editing.  Sometimes you will need to balance your optimum time for editing vs immediate family requirements. Don’t get frustrated, there are moments when you will just have to get off that chair to complete something around the house. Take a deep breath! 

(5) Keep your phone well out of distance – Distraction! Distraction! Distraction! Need I say more? If you have it with you, you will pick it up and this will break your focus. It’s like when you were taking your exams, and you came downstairs for a 15 minute break.  You then put the TV on for a quick scan, and 1 hr later you’re hooked on some programme and the books are sitting waiting for you.  Find it easy to re-focus?

(6) Visualise the end goal – Tell yourself every day that you will get the editing finished.  Each time I start to edit, I visualise my end goal, and that is a finished book sitting on a shelf in a bookshop – or in someone’s bookshelf at home.  

If you are in the editing process of your novel, please share your thoughts.  




Posted in Writing Challenge March

#CommunityChallenge Letter to March

A 10-day writing challenge set up by one of our Community Writers Saumya Agrawal. Today Mark’s the last in this series. Thanks all for reading and commenting.

Letter to a stranger